Yeah, I got sucked into doing another group story. (Actually I volunteered.)
I posted my chapter yesterday. (Tom actually posted the story for me, because apparently I’m too incompetent on formats other than Wordpress to accomplish anything.)
I worked very long and hard on the piece. (I pumped it out in 8 hours, after I got the writing bug.)
I hate doing research. It’s such a pain in the ass to find things that aren’t wiki-related. Couple that with research on women in the 1940’s during WW2, and I was starving for information. (Actually, I found some very intriguing articles about the war movement. There are some very neat, authentic videos on Youtube by the US War Department in relation to women doing their part. )
I am too lazy for real punctuation in this post. (Yeah, what she said.)
Enjoy the story. (Or I will cry buckets of salty tears that will overflow and drown small helpless kittens.)
Think of the kittens. (I meant it about the crying.)
Let me know what you think! (Unless it’s bad.)
Hey Great Ms. Kate,
Would you be willing to post any youtube video links - if you still have them? Or email to me. Thanks much!
Jeri
I already said I like it. I don’t know if you read Jeri’s comment over there, but she had good points I think should be incorporated.
Just my 2¢.
Oh, and I’d never make kittens cry…only stink!
A good chapter. And yeh, the research is tough. I’ve post Mach I Mod 0 of the story bible, which I’ll update as the writing goes on.
War Department
Rosie the Riveter
Finnish Documentary
I will be making the changes you suggested as well! Thanks for the tips!
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