Comments on: Sophie from Shinola – Part Twelve http://anaedream.com/2008/04/02/sophie-from-shinola-part-twelve/ The Blatherings of Kathryn Nerys Baker Fri, 12 Mar 2010 17:41:00 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 By: Justin Ryan http://anaedream.com/2008/04/02/sophie-from-shinola-part-twelve/comment-page-1/#comment-1124 Justin Ryan Thu, 03 Apr 2008 15:12:15 +0000 http://anaedream.com/2008/04/02/sophie-from-shinola-part-twelve/#comment-1124 <a href="http://u.nderblog.com/2008/04/sophie-from-shinola-part-xiii/" rel="nofollow">Part XIII is up now</a>, on my new personal blog, not justin-ryan.com. Sorry for the change mid-stream; I didn't have it ready to go until this morning. Part XIII is up now, on my new personal blog, not justin-ryan.com. Sorry for the change mid-stream; I didn’t have it ready to go until this morning.

]]> By: Vince O'Connor http://anaedream.com/2008/04/02/sophie-from-shinola-part-twelve/comment-page-1/#comment-1123 Vince O'Connor Thu, 03 Apr 2008 13:06:44 +0000 http://anaedream.com/2008/04/02/sophie-from-shinola-part-twelve/#comment-1123 Great job with the backstory Kate. And letting us see more of what's going on in Sophie's mind. Great job with the backstory Kate. And letting us see more of what’s going on in Sophie’s mind.

]]> By: Tom http://anaedream.com/2008/04/02/sophie-from-shinola-part-twelve/comment-page-1/#comment-1121 Tom Thu, 03 Apr 2008 02:00:45 +0000 http://anaedream.com/2008/04/02/sophie-from-shinola-part-twelve/#comment-1121 Alas, poor Raven. We knew her, Sophie! Now I wish I hadn't killed her off. Maybe someone can reassemble her scattered atoms. Very nice, Kate. Alas, poor Raven. We knew her, Sophie!

Now I wish I hadn’t killed her off. Maybe someone can reassemble her scattered atoms.

Very nice, Kate.

]]> By: Jeri http://anaedream.com/2008/04/02/sophie-from-shinola-part-twelve/comment-page-1/#comment-1120 Jeri Wed, 02 Apr 2008 22:40:56 +0000 http://anaedream.com/2008/04/02/sophie-from-shinola-part-twelve/#comment-1120 Very vivid imagery! It certainly helps flesh out Sophie's character to have some solid backstory. I'd imagine since she's moved into a co-hosting arrangement with Blink her eye color doesn't matter so much anymore. ;) (except for internal consistency... I don't recall it being mentioned either) Very vivid imagery! It certainly helps flesh out Sophie’s character to have some solid backstory.

I’d imagine since she’s moved into a co-hosting arrangement with Blink her eye color doesn’t matter so much anymore. ;) (except for internal consistency… I don’t recall it being mentioned either)

]]> By: Nathan http://anaedream.com/2008/04/02/sophie-from-shinola-part-twelve/comment-page-1/#comment-1119 Nathan Wed, 02 Apr 2008 20:56:11 +0000 http://anaedream.com/2008/04/02/sophie-from-shinola-part-twelve/#comment-1119 Now <em>that's</em> what I'm talkin' about. Way to shake things up. And it's really beautifully written. This really does get better and better with each entry. I've said it before, but I can't wait to get my hands back on this. Now that’s what I’m talkin’ about. Way to shake things up. And it’s really beautifully written. This really does get better and better with each entry. I’ve said it before, but I can’t wait to get my hands back on this.

]]> By: Kate http://anaedream.com/2008/04/02/sophie-from-shinola-part-twelve/comment-page-1/#comment-1118 Kate Wed, 02 Apr 2008 20:39:28 +0000 http://anaedream.com/2008/04/02/sophie-from-shinola-part-twelve/#comment-1118 I just put it up like five seconds ago :) I just put it up like five seconds ago :)

]]> By: Nathan who falls for everything http://anaedream.com/2008/04/02/sophie-from-shinola-part-twelve/comment-page-1/#comment-1117 Nathan who falls for everything Wed, 02 Apr 2008 20:38:12 +0000 http://anaedream.com/2008/04/02/sophie-from-shinola-part-twelve/#comment-1117 Hey, you were supposed to let me know this was up so I could link it! I shall do so now and then return for the reading. Hey, you were supposed to let me know this was up so I could link it! I shall do so now and then return for the reading.

]]> By: Kate http://anaedream.com/2008/04/02/sophie-from-shinola-part-twelve/comment-page-1/#comment-1116 Kate Wed, 02 Apr 2008 20:36:30 +0000 http://anaedream.com/2008/04/02/sophie-from-shinola-part-twelve/#comment-1116 Keep in mind, that while Nathan introduced Sophie's parents as miners just outside of town, Sophie finds comfort in imagining a slightly different life in Chinola. One with abit more substance than the stink of fisheries and pit operations. Ultimately to keep the stink of "Raven" from intruding into places where Sophie felt safe. I've also introduced a brother, who may or may not be real. Did he go off and join some sort of resistance? Or had Sophie imagined having someone around who was a strong protector? I also can't recall if anyone described Sophie's eye color. Let me know and I'll change it. Keep in mind, that while Nathan introduced Sophie’s parents as miners just outside of town, Sophie finds comfort in imagining a slightly different life in Chinola. One with abit more substance than the stink of fisheries and pit operations. Ultimately to keep the stink of “Raven” from intruding into places where Sophie felt safe.

I’ve also introduced a brother, who may or may not be real. Did he go off and join some sort of resistance? Or had Sophie imagined having someone around who was a strong protector?

I also can’t recall if anyone described Sophie’s eye color. Let me know and I’ll change it.

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